The Ghost of Christmas Past
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Nice to see Harmony featuring and where would we be without that ever-entertaining Captain Ochre?
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Marion
- Cloudbase Captain
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Isabelle
- Lieutenant
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Isabelle, liked your comment about the denouement, the story didn't pan out the way I originally planned in the writing either , but sometimes, that's a good thing. The story started off as a bit too dark, then seemed to be nothing but complete fluff, and then finally turned out as a mix of both, thanks to some excellent (and when it is never!) advice from Marion. Another example of how writing can be an organic process. REALLY glad you found something you liked in it.
This has to be the quickest story I've written, and on the heels of the calendar, I must have borrowed someone's Inspiration Fairy, maybe it was VMR's.. (sorry about that, love!) Still not up to Chris or Marion's superhero standards, but....works for me!
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Carrie
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VMR
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