VMR's Into the Depths
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I wish I could come up with creative and believable Mysteron threats like she does. Good work!
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Isabelle
- Lieutenant
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Thank you for a most enjoyable read.
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Marion
- Cloudbase Captain
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I’m please that you enjoy the story. It was an interesting story to write as it changed so much from when I first thought up the idea. I ended up adding Grey’s part because I wondered if what happen to Sepia’s was scarily enough. Then I realize that the why, what, how need to be explained, hence the other captains as well as Colonel White‘s pieces.
Oh if you read the last bit as soon as it was posted then please re-read it, as I accidentally left out a small bit. Thankfully Chris put it right as soon as I let her know. Oh well that’s why I pre-apologize for mistakes in the acknowledgements.
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VMR
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Keep writing, it's great to get your stories.
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Carrie
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VMR
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