A Little Misfortune
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It's the story of Patrick Donaghue's progress from hard-working student to jailbird to crime lord to Spectrum captain.
Another excellent read from Marion - I really don't know how you do it!
Somebody else's beta reader
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hazel
- Cloudbase Captain
- Posts: 903
- Joined: Mon Jun 21, 2004 10:15 pm
- Location: London, UK
I'm only halfway through, and enjoying it tremendously so far. Some great original characters, Marion could easily write a 'proper' novel; (don't hit me...you KNOW what I mean!) with her talent.
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Carrie
- Cloudbase Captain
- Posts: 830
- Joined: Tue Jun 29, 2004 9:31 pm
- Location: Wet Wales
Finely and sympathetically drawn characters with nuances subtle enough to make any author, professional or otherwise, weep in frustration ; interesting, plausible and no doubt very well-researched situations and backgrounds.
Beautifully balanced between description, thought and dialogue, this one has it all. Marion, well done. I know I've said it before, but you set the benchmark. I am seriously in awe.
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Skybase Girl
- Major
- Posts: 648
- Joined: Thu Mar 08, 2007 10:06 pm
- Location: Newcastle England
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Mind you, I don't know about a 'benchmark', Skybase Girl. I am glad to say that there are many authors whose stories grace the pages of the web site, who produce excellently crafted, subtle work that I rate very highly. Long may they continue to contribute to the fandom.
Of course, my normal method of rating any story is the number of hits I get when I search for the words 'Blue' and 'Adam'...
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Marion
- Cloudbase Captain
- Posts: 2964
- Joined: Mon Jun 21, 2004 10:21 pm
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