To Have Loved and Lost
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I accept Marion's point that this is a "back story", and as such, does not have an all action plot. However, the narrative is so beautifully written and the characters so finely drawn that it is a truly accomplished work.
Marion, there are well-respected ,published authors of considerable reputation who I suspect would be delighted to say they had written this.
Well done !
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Marion's great strength is characterisation, and that's what she gives us by the sackful here. I found the story of Adam's relationship with Soraya totally believable, and it was good to have the gaps, mentioned in other stories, filled in.
A highly recommended read.
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